Study Group 2


Prasad Dalvi , PPSA (A)

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SEPTEMBER 2019 ROUND

Title:    Mating Beetles 

Goal:  To capture the mating Beetles   

Equipment/Source:    Nikon D850 90mm Tamron Macro Lens Speedlight 910 Flash
 
Technique:   f/8, 1/125, ISO 320, 90mm

Processing:    
Cropping for composition. Highlights adjusted and color correction using Adobe Photoshop.  
 

Comments/Scores (N, T, P, E, Total)

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Review by commentator Dan C.

Your image is well done and has a strong nature story.  It is both challenging and fun finding mating insects and this pair of leaf beetles on a dayflower was a good find. Having them mating also helps in getting the shot since they are not so prone to taking off when you carefully approach.

Technically the exposure is good.  The beetles are very sharp and I have no problems with the fall off of sharpness on the dayflower.  That helps focus the viewer on the action.

Pictorially your composition is good and the main subjects are well isolated.  Since there is no information in the background that adds to your nature story I see no reason not to crop tighter and resize.  This helps make the action more dominant in the image area.  My suggestion to crop is not enough to knock of  a pictorial point but it did stop me from adding the Exceptional point.

N3, T3, P3, E0, Total 9


Review by Larry T

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
First, I would like to note that you appear to be a quick study as many of the suggestion provided to you last month seem to be employed in the capture of this image.

The action of the image showing the mating process of these beetles provides a strong nature story line and a bit of drama included. This is well done.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The angle of view and the introduction of the speed light make this quite an exceptional image. You have managed to capture the beetles quite well as they are sharp and clear. The f8 setting worked well. While some may feel that the DOF is too shallow the fact that the flower is blurred I feel simply draws attention to the beetles and they are the subjects. Your setting and angle have allowed for a seamless background that also enhances the focus of the viewer on the beetles.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 3-Excellent exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The somewhat centered position of the subject is not objectionable as the curve of the flower gives the illusion of following the rule of thirds. The one aspect of the image that I find out of place is the yellow flower showing behind the beetles. I think this would be a stronger image without the addition of that yellow flower. This may have been solved by you physically being slightly lower and to the right.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 8


Review by Robert D

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Excellent image of live beetle activity

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The beetles are very sharp. The exposure is beautiful but the depth of field holds back my praise - it is too shallow and also contrasty. Considering that you used a flash you should be able to use a smaller aperture. Additionally you try to use a stacking procedure to increase your depth of field

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Has impact.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 7


Review by Adrian B

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Hi Prasad! Well captured! Clear story here! Well done.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
You are materially at right angles to the two insects, helping to keep much of both of them in focus. f8 won't deliver a very wide DOF and I do wonder whether a different setting would have helped here, even if this resulted in a darker image at capture which can easily be brought back in processing.
I conclude though you have enough of the insects in focus in this instance.
I do find the strong yellow behind the left insect distracting. I appreciate that you were stuck with that, but I suggest you consider doing some local adjustments to make this area greener or certainly less bright yellow.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Having deducted a point for the yellow within technical, I cant again here, but the yellow certainly for me affects my pleasure from you fine image

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 8


Review by Linda C

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Excellent macro shot.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Sharpness and color good, although I am distracted by the yellow behind one of the insects.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 3-Excellent exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Great shot.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 9

IF APPLICABLE, WHY DESERVING OF EXTRA POINT FOR EXCELLENCE
1

SCORE E (Exceptional)

GRAND TOTAL WITH EXTRA POINT 10


Review by Suman B.

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
the right subject approached wrongly would be my opinion. please always try to remember the added advantage of using a tripod. mount your cam on a tripod and compose the shot before taking it. don't worry it'll give you time. I know as I have been in many such situations. go manual with your lens and exposure. duck at the same level of the mating pair and try to get the best depth of focus before applying the depth of field. if possible use MAGMOD flash system attched to your existing flash system, which would give you ample light and the colour grains wouldn't so hard as it seems now.

SCORE N (Nature) 2-Nature story of average strength (portrait

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
although you tried hard but lack of technical know how let you down. in the head antenna is unsharp beyond recognition and in the background the mating drops are way too un-sharp.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 1-Inadequate exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
more of a portrait whereas it should be very good nature image a judge would aspire to award. drop down and survey from all around to get a good summary of the fact that from which angle it would look best.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 5


Review by Linda C

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Interesting picture; beetles activity sharp.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
I like the blurring of the background, however, the Yellow was distracting; I also would have cropped the bottom more to get a larger view of the beetles.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Great shot; interesting and good color.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 8


Review by Dennis A.

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
A good nature picture with a story.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Excellent color and balance. Good DOF and everything looks sharp.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 3-Excellent exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
It has good composition with impact.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 9


Review by Bogdan B

NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Mating has surely one of the strongest nature stories.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
One beetle has sharp eye and the other not. DOF is too narrow.
Flash make visible shadows on the flower and reflexes on the beetle.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The beetles are too central. I would crop on the bottom and on both sides to get more diagonal composition beginning on bottom left third. Yellow part of flower is too strong. I suggest to low saturation of it and darken it.


SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 7
















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JULY 2019 ROUND
Title:   Multitasking Beeflies
 
   
Goal:   To capture the mating Beeflies

Equipment/Source:  D5300, 90mm Tamron Macro lens

Technique:   F/16, 1/200, ISO 100

Processing:   As a beginner in PP in PS used Cropping with Color correction, and Burning the background to bring attention to the subject.

Comments/Scores (N, T, P, E, Total)

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Review by commentator Tom S.
Nature Story – Good nature story of the mating flies. P-3

Technical - The fly to the right is sharp but the one on the left is soft. You used f16 but being very close, you don’t have much depth of field even at that aperture. You need to move to the side so the flies are parallel to you and in the same plane. T-2

Pictorial Quality – Nice angle of the joined flies, but the bright green of the plant they are on is very distracting. Reduce the brightness of the green and brighten up the flies slightly. P-2
P3, T2, P2 = 7


Review by Larry T.
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
The two mating beeflies ( a sight few will ever see) carries a strong nature story line. The mating process is clearly visible and dramatic.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-positive nature story

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The image is generally quite sharp (although the wings of the right beefly are nearly invisible) . Color rendition appears accurate and they are complementary and thus make the picture more pleasing. The camera settings are generally adequate but either greater depth of field or a faster shutter may have been able to save those missing wings.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Pictorially this is a pleasing image. The diagonal line formed by the position of the two beeflies adds dynamics to the image. You effectively darkened the background to bring out the flies. I would suggest that since the subject is mating that darkening the bright greens on the left would draw more attention to the left fly. I would also selective brighten the fly on the left so that it matches the brightness of the one on the right.. If possible, I would add a bit of space at the top of the image as the left fly feels a bit cramped in the image.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 7


Review by Isabella Z.
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE


SCORE N (Nature) 3-positive nature story

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Exposure and color is fine and I like the color of green and yellow. However I think your focus point is off. Currently I can see the flowers on the left is super sharp but the beeflies are not sharp enough.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE


SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 8


Review by Sylvia W.
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Capturing the two Beeflies side on has given us the story you were looking for.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-positive nature story

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Overall the image is quite dark and could benefit from some lightening. This could have been achieved in camera by choosing a higher ISO.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 1-Inadequate exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Both flies appear to be a little soft. Once again a higher ISO could have ensured a sharper image. I like the diagonal placement of the flies, but the background is quite distracting.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 6


Review by Hattie S.
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Wow, what a capture of the action. Great nature story.

SCORE N (Nature) 3-positive nature story

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
You have pretty slow shutter for flies that moves like that. I would use set auto ISO, but make sure have higher shutter speed to avoid motion blur. The f/16 aperture is making teh background more sharp then it necessary. I would suggest to set the aperture wider. The background is quite disturbing due to the aperture. Also could try to move around to see if you can get better background (providing the flies are still there doing it)

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
The motion blur not helping witht the picture quality. Nice com

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 2-Average composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 7


Review by Linda C.
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Story good

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Fairly difficult shot. Composition, sharpness and color very good. I like that the one plant the subject was feeding from was sharp.

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 3-Excellent exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Interesting and high impact shot.

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 3-Excellent composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 9

IF APPLICABLE, WHY DESERVING OF EXTRA POINT FOR EXCELLENCE
Difficult scene to capture

SCORE E (Exceptional) 1

GRAND TOTAL WITH EXTRA POINT 10


Review by MJ Springett
NATURE REVIEW OF THE IMAGE
Good story

SCORE N (Nature) 3-nature story strong

TECHNICAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Sharp good color

SCORE T (Technical Quality) 2-Average exposure color balance and sharpness

PICTORIAL REVIEW OF IMAGE
Background is distracting

SCORE P (Pictorial Quality) 1-Inadequate composition and impact

TOTAL BASIC SCORE 6

I am a committee member of on of the Oldest Photographic Society known as "The Photographic Society of India" and am actively involved in promoting Photography through Training, Photowalks, and Conducting Photography Tours. My major interest is Nature Photography and specifically Macro and Birding. Academically I have an Engineering background and have working experience in the Information Technology field for 2 decades. However, I have committed myself to Photography which is my passion and am pursuing it. 
   
Given an opportunity, I would be glad to be the part of the Study Group and would like to submit my images for critique. I also will provide healthy and productive, positive critiques if needed and be willing to put in the time and follow the deadlines.